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I have eyes for no one else
You have charmed me with your love
You gave my life a new sense
Of my dreams you’re the most beloved

So pierce me with your eyes
And kill me with your kisses
This feeling is so nice
Reduce my soul to pieces

Poison me with your lips
And stab me with your smiles
Rip my heart to strips
Then melt me like the ice

Drown me in your essence
And strike me with the thunder
Of your delightful presence
To stop me from going under
©2007-2009 *Lexafar
:iconlexafar:

Author's Comments

Its been quite a while since i uploaded a poem so i decided to do so and heres my latest poem as usual inspired in the love of my life Kovu :love: Hope you like it :)

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:icondeliriousfoxglove:
oh wow..... i love this o-o it's so beautiful! "the thunder of your delightful presense" really stuck with me for some reason. it's so powerful! and saying to "drown" you to "keep you from going under!" wow wow wow! i am SO faving this yknow! absatively gorgeous!

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I'd like your respect but I'd rather have mine~
:iconlexafar:
lol, well thanks so much, i'm very glsd you liked it that much :D

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Feel free to take a look to my gallery and help me spread my love for Kovu all over the DA :heart:[link]:heart:

Oh! how the world, seems so unfair, creating a love that cannot be shared-"Melissa Etheridge"
:iconfoxspirit259:
wow Lex! :wow: this one has so much passion and emotion! :happycry: i loved the way the lines all melted together to form such an awsome feeling when you read it! :thanks: really fantastic job on this! :hug:

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Tears stream :tears: down your face
When you loose something you cannot replace :no:
Tears stream :cries: down your face
I promise you i will lean from my mistakes :thanks:
Tears stream :sniff: down your face
And i will try to fix you:cling::cuddle:
:iconlexafar:
thankies i was very inspired at the moment :D

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Feel free to take a look to my gallery and help me spread my love for Kovu all over the DA :heart:[link]:heart:

Oh! how the world, seems so unfair, creating a love that cannot be shared-"Melissa Etheridge"
:iconfoxspirit259:
hehe yeah those are always the best times for creativity! :nod:

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Tears stream :tears: down your face
When you loose something you cannot replace :no:
Tears stream :cries: down your face
I promise you i will lean from my mistakes :thanks:
Tears stream :sniff: down your face
And i will try to fix you:cling::cuddle:
:iconumiyo:
:wow: What an awesome poem!!! :wow: WOW!!
:iconheartfire11:
wow. this is so full of passion! love so much it hurts! Lexafar this is absolutely wonderful! i can't tell you how amazing i think this poem is. NEW FAVE

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:heart::flame:
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c(")(") This is bunny. Copy and paste bunny into your signature to help him gain world domination.

^^ <----i use that smiley too much

:batty::dygel: <-- so cute ^^
:iconlexafar:
yup, so sad theyre so few :sniff:

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Feel free to take a look to my gallery and help me spread my love for Kovu all over the DA :heart:[link]:heart:

Oh! how the world, seems so unfair, creating a love that cannot be shared-"Melissa Etheridge"
:iconlexafar:
thanks glad you liked it, i was really inspired this time i guess :D

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Feel free to take a look to my gallery and help me spread my love for Kovu all over the DA :heart:[link]:heart:

Oh! how the world, seems so unfair, creating a love that cannot be shared-"Melissa Etheridge"
:iconlexafar:
cool, i love when my work moves peoples hearts :D

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Feel free to take a look to my gallery and help me spread my love for Kovu all over the DA :heart:[link]:heart:

Oh! how the world, seems so unfair, creating a love that cannot be shared-"Melissa Etheridge"

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